Take a Breath


Commas indicate

a subtle change

in direction,

a promise

to tie everything


in a moment or two


About dwk758

When I was in the 6th grade, I was fascinated by a brief section in my World History book about ancient Greece and the philosophers, mythology, and original Olympics. I wrote my first poem about it that started: "Ancient Greeks and old time Romans...". Ever since it has been an elaboration on that theme...and I have wandered far afield.
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4 Responses to Take a Breath

  1. pen2needle says:

    You certainly have an eye for finding the unusual in the usual. Great work!

    Thank you for stopping by my blog and for the like 🙂


  2. Sara Febles says:

    I like this one too. Great writing.

    Liked by 1 person

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